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June 9th, 2010 posted by
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My feelings have been taken to a peak, I have a confession.
In the morning and at night, you are my obsession.
Is love really at first sight, or should I walk by again?
It’s more than I could ever feign now or back then.
You’re everything I ever wanted and so much more.
You make me feel like I no one ever had before.
I feel harder for you than I could have ever predicted
Bottom line, you’re my drug and im addicted.
FloMoJo says:
June 14th, 2010 at 10:53 pm
10! I like all poetry…good job.
Fedora Nora says:
June 18th, 2010 at 8:03 am
I give it a 9! I really loved it!
♪Cookies -n- Cream♪-BYE J-Chill♥ says:
June 19th, 2010 at 11:22 am
10, great job! this is one of the best poems i’ve read actually, congrats!
Im someone else says:
June 19th, 2010 at 5:55 pm
thats really good keep up the good work 10/10!
justlikeme0 says:
June 22nd, 2010 at 2:12 pm
its pretty good. id say………..8.2 (with 10 being best)
got some talent there. id like to read more =)
Courtnie R says:
June 23rd, 2010 at 10:09 pm
i would have to say 9.5 its really good
**K-DUB317** says:
June 27th, 2010 at 11:38 am
I GIVE IT A 6.5 , ONLY because you should say “you’re my drug and NOW i’m addicted”. That would make it about a 7.5…………. GREAT job though, I must say!